Narrative Writing - The Whispher

 Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

WALT write a creative narrative story

Once upon a time AA was walking in the city kaitaia at night He heard a whispher and the tree were disappearing. coll was a bad guy who was making the tree disappear. He wot to have the tree for he own land next coll mad the city disappeared AA had to sop coll. he put TNT no coll to abstract him AA exploded the TNT coll powers went wee the and came bake coll nevi came den AA safe the day.