Narrative Writing - The Whispher

 Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

WALT write a creative narrative story

Once upon a time AA was walking in the city kaitaia at night He heard a whispher and the tree were disappearing. coll was a bad guy who was making the tree disappear. He wot to have the tree for he own land next coll mad the city disappeared AA had to sop coll. he put TNT no coll to abstract him AA exploded the TNT coll powers went wee the and came bake coll nevi came den AA safe the day.

Thank-you Whaea Seroya

 

My plan our persuasive

1. WALT plan our persuasive writing on a JAM board.

Morewa School Learning Day

I went to Morewa School for people who  have hearing and mrs Neki took me to it. I play soccer and i got a goad it was us big boys an it was hard and we won the game. I did science experiment. I did the Lava lamp and wrap the eggs and it didn~t break.

ANZAC DAY

 ANZAC DAY  is to remember the men and women who went to war. lest we forget. we wear poppies because they were the first flowers that grew on the battlefield. Dawn ceremonies are a time to remember all the people from different countries. 

The Great Reading Adventure

We are learning to write a moment in time about our class assembly, 'The Great Reading Adventure.

Here comes the sun started and I felt extraordinary! I was one of Maui brothers! and I said we can't make the sun go more slowly. The sun blew me away it was too fast. We don't' have time to eat our food and do all our jobs.

Tractor Trek - Big Feelings

The big feelings trek came to school. Cat told us she was sad and it got bigger and bigger.  She wanted to be happy.

All About Me Poem

 I am learning to add details to my writing add details to my

I wrote a poem about myself and whanau

Thank You Whaea G

Raranga Matihiko

I know how to create a book on Book Creator. I saw the waka Ngātokimatawhaoroa and Kupe holding his padde. The best part of the trip that I enjoyed was wearing the VR glasses.

My Speech - Kids Should Play Sport

WALT present a persuasive speech.WALT present a persuasive speech.

Do you know Kape Murray ? Do you want to be an All Star champion? Well turn off the tv and get outside ? All kids should play sport!

2. Kids should play sports because it makes them feel better. It will stop them being lazy and grumpy.

3. Kids should play sports and eat healthy food to grow strong and do more sports. They will do it well if they are healthy.

4. If kids play sports they will make new friends. You can play with your friends and ask them to come and play with you. You can have friends at home to play outside or you can play basketball with them at school.

5. All the kids need to play sports. I love to play basketball and I do athletics. It helps me to get
more energy out and I can concentrate better too.

Holiday postcard

WALT  write a holiday postcard.

My postcard is to my cousin Tyler

Dear Tyler 

I went to the lego shop and bought a lot of lego. I went to buy more but it was $30. It was fun to make. It took  a long time to finish. It took 55 minutes. I made a dinosaur and it was hard to break the lego. I went ice skating and I falled over a lot. It was cold. I did it all by myself without a trolley.


From Kaiora

Covid-19

WALT explain what the rules are at Level 2 and what we think about it.

I cannot touch anyone when I play at school so I do not get covid. When the bell rings l need to sanitise everytime l come inside.

Moment in Time - Elephant

WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.

Writing Learning Reflection

What did I do well?I had done a lot of plans .

What did I find tricky? writing more ideas

How can I extend myself next time? I can do more writing.

DESCRIBE A MOMENT IN TIME - Diving

WEEK 7 - WALT to hook our reader in with our first sentence.
WALT use descriptive vocabulary to describe a moment in time.

The dark shadowy diver is in the shimmering and swirling ocean .

corona

tes  stop  the  coronavirus  

kawa of care class assembly-draft writing

 WALT understand  the kawa of care.

WALT write a recount of our class assembly experience.

Here is my draft writing - Last Friday we did our Kawa of Care Assembly. I was a stealer with hori and millan. I was the stealer with the cat mask and I was creeping and sneaking to steal the Chromebooks.

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